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hugos diary entry

January9

Dear diary,
That old pesky man at the minituare toy shop stole all my belongings and the most preshus thing to me MY NOTE BOOK…

I feel so apprehensive all I wanted was that toy mose its unbelievable!My hands were tremberling that day it was terefing.

when I looked out the clock I saw the old man shouting at a girl about my age.When he let go I managed to get away from the station exspecter

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  1. January 9th, 2015 at 11:27 am      Reply Mr Prior Says:

    Hi Lewis,

    I wanted to say how much I enjoyed your use of adventurous vocabulary! I particularly loved the use of the word apprehensive and the word precious. Next time you should try to be a little more careful with your punctuation when typing, as this time you have missed a few commas!

    Well done though and thanks for sharing your writing.

    Mr Prior


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