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Instructions FOR A MAGIC TRICK

February6

.   First you   need    a   five   pawnd   not   and     a     one   pound   coin.

2.   Next   plase     the   one   pound   coun   into   the  five    pound (but

be cerfal)

3.  After   that  flick   the   five   pound    nowt   so    the   one   pound   nowt   don  t    show    the   ordiyons.

4.  then    show    the    ordiyans   your   hands.

5.   finaly   show    the    ordiyans.

 

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“Instructions FOR A MAGIC TRICK”

  1. February 27th, 2015 at 2:34 pm      Reply Maddison Says:

    + you have great time conectives.
    ? what else will happen.
    ->remember capitle letters.


  2. February 27th, 2015 at 2:36 pm      Reply Harriet Says:

    +I love your bossy adverbs.
    ?Have you tried this trick yet.
    ->Check your spellings.


  3. February 27th, 2015 at 2:39 pm      Reply Jayden17 Says:

    YOU NEED TO ADD MORE ADJECTIVES WHY DID YOU WRITE THIS PEACE OF WORK WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT


  4. April 30th, 2015 at 9:14 am      Reply Younnes Says:

    I loved your use of bossy verbs.It really brought your writing to life!What inspired you to write a magic trick.To improve you should include extra information to be more descriptive.


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