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Chapter 2


Hugo was in his room, looking at his magic book. He knew evry trick in the book like making cards fly just like they old man had done. Slowly, he unraveled a key from his hand! He had managed to grab Isabelle’s necalace without her feeling ( he is a magicain!) He walked to the Atomaten and placed the key in the back of it’s body. Hugo’s heart was pouding with excitment, he could not wait to see what the Robot was going to write…


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“Chapter 2”

  1. February 12th, 2015 at 8:53 am      Reply Miss Drake Says:

    WOW Lily what a brilliant piece of writing. I like your use of a adverb to start a sentence. What do you think will happen next?
    Miss Drake

  2. February 27th, 2015 at 2:18 pm      Reply Harriet Says:

    +You have described chapter 2 really well.
    ? How did Hugo get the necklace.
    ->Use more adjectives.

  3. February 27th, 2015 at 2:42 pm      Reply Jaime.c Says:

    +I like the sentence’s you wrote

    ? Why did Hugo look in his magic book?

    -> Use more adjectives

  4. February 27th, 2015 at 2:44 pm      Reply kaidon Says:

    + I like the way you used pounding
    ?Did you enjoy wrting it
    ->Could you write more Next time?


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