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Cadburys chocolate time line

May20

1905-Cadbury dairy milk 1908-Bournville chocolate 1920-Cadbury flake 1929-frys crunchie 1938-Cadbury roses 1958-Cadbury picnic 1960-Cadbury buttons 1971- Cadbury creame egg 1981-Cadbury whispa 1989-Cadbury white buttons 1990-Cadbury world opens 2001-Cadbury brunch bar 2013-Cadbury marvallous creations   I hope you like my time line by the help of my Cadburys fact-filr book 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

Cadburys quick and fast facts you need to know

May15

Did you know a bar of Cadbury Dairy milk is sold every two seconds Did you know in summer 2009, a wispe gold bar wrapped in gold leaf went on sale in Harrods, for 961 pounds 48 pence Cadbury makes about 350 million creme eggs evrey year aloth they are only sold between easter The […]

Why I love school!

May14

I love school because you learn. I also love school because learning is fun. I love school because my Teacher is lovely. Those are just a few things why:)

Cadburys World

May14

Initially we were told to get ready by Miss Drake.After,we checked that the double Decker bus was here.We ventured on to it and I sat next to my best friend Frankie when we got there we went inside. After that we got with are group leader and went to the toilet and we played in […]

Cadbury World Trip

May14

On Monday we went to the famous gigantic Cadbury World. We got there on a double deckar bus. First we went to the 4D show, which was great! Next we went to see the amazing Bean to Bar talk! We learnt that tasty chocolate has milk, sugar and coco beans. We also learnt that Cadbury […]

writing a recount cabury would

May14

First we got on a double decker bus, I sat on a comfortable seat next to my best friend Jake. First we went on a double decker bus.After we got there and  went to the toilets.Then we went to see a four d show.After that went to a room and a lady told us about […]

Cadbury world visit

May14

Yesterday we went to cadbury world .We went on a double decker bus .I sat next to my friend Angela . first we went  on a double decker bus went all the way to Birmingham. Next we went from the coach to the enterance of the one hundned cm  factory. Then  we got  into  groups […]

Cadbury World visit

May14

First Miss Drake politely asked us to go and grab our coats and lunch bags.Just then the double decker coach arrived, I double checked my lunch bag  just in case I didn’t like anything in there.Then we had to choose a partener to travel on the coach with, I chose my friend Maddison. While we […]

Cadburys world visit

May14

Firstly we all got ready to go to the amazing cabdurys world for a great school trip because we were leaning about chocolate.After mr ferina went to check the double  deckar bus and it was here.A while later we arived at cadburys world.  We bought are tickets so we could adventure in the best building.Then […]

Cadbury World Visit 2015

May13

On Monday 11th May 2015 4 Tomlinson visited Cadbury World. we went on a double decker bus, I sat on the top floor it was fun! i sat next to lewis  and behind is jayden and josh, it was a hour drive it was but fun at the same time.We ate chocolate at the factory […]

My recount of Cadburys World

May13

Firstly, we made a line by Miss Drake and went outside ( in the sun) to check that the double deker was outside the school. Next we went on the coach, also I was really lucky because my seat was really cumfy as a pillow. Also, I sat next to my friend Harriet. To get […]

ABOUT CADBURY WOLD

May13

I went to cadbures wold on 11.5.15.we went on adubbel decer bus and i sat next to Lewis.   First we got into  are groops my groop leader was miss Boaler.We then watched the 4d show.After that we had are been to bar talk also lunch.   Today i lernt that chocolate dosent be made […]

Cadburys world!

May13

First we checked if the couch was there after we saw it Miss Drake told us to gather are things together  and  get on the Coach.Next we  got the Double Decker couch my seat was very comfortable. After that  we got of the bus,and the teachers split us up into groups my group leader was […]

Charlie with the golden ticket

May13

Charlie was struggling. He hadn’t eaten a proper meal in days.Since his dad had lost his job, there was no hope, not even with a single 10p. As the winter spread all over town, his body, which you can see his bones, was binging to turn as white as snow.As Charlie walked as slow as […]

Cadbury World visit

May13

Our children have been writing a recount about their trip to Cadbury World. They were asked to focus on: chronological order time connectives varying sentence starters Please comment about how successful they have been.

Why my teacher is the best :) by Lily

May9

My teacher is the best, why? Because her vioce is like angels from the sky. My teacher is the best, why? Because her lessons are always fun. My teacher is the best, why? Because her smile is the happiest thing to see. My teacher is the best, why? Because her hair is as smoth as […]

Charlie’s story

May8

Charlie was struggling.He was struggling to keep the Bucket family alive even though there very hungry and very frozen?His father had lost his job just a week ago and can’t  do anything about it.Charlie had came back from school when he stood in the distance by the factory.He gently sniffed the smoothed air he could […]

The golden ticket has been found!

May8

Charlie paused for a moment ,turning to the busy town centre. He reached to the little sweet shop , “Please can I have a FUDGE MELLOW DELIGHT,”asked Charlie politely.”You may,”replied Mr Tim. Charlie gave Mr Tim the coin that he was clutching in his hands. After Charlie got his chocolate bar he ran as fast […]

Favourite paragraphs

May8

Charlie slowly strolled down the street and as he was turning a bendy corner he spotted Mr Tims sweet shop.This sweet shop had been standing there for years ,however Charlie had never been in it before.When Charlie proudly walked in he smelt the chocolatey air drifting through him and saw all the jars of sweets […]

The amazing story of charlie and the choclate factory

May8

Charlie was struggling. His family hadn’t eaten substantial for days. Charlie’s family was frozen and hungry. They really want food because they’re poor. Charlie went to get some food.

Charlie and the choclate factory

May8

Chapter 1 Charlie and his family was starving and freezing there house was shattered and they don’t have any money since Charlies Dad lost his job,They can’t even pay half of the food they need did for the family of seven.The extremely frozen weather makes the Buckets every more cold and hunger. One frosty morning […]

Charlie and the chocolate factory (episode1 part 1 made by Peter17)

May8

Charlie was anxious and exhausted. He hasn’t had a decent dinner for two months! Mr bucket lost his job and couldn’t get another one. Charlie’s fingers and toes are numb with the freezing cold. London had a heavy blizzard for the whole of winter. suddenly Charlie saw something glimmering in the snow.”what’s that” he thought, […]

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Youngsters strike gold !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

May8

BY LILY DAVIS On MONDAY 17TH OF MAY 1989 TWO FIRST GOLDEN TIKETETS , Mr Wonka had put in his Chocolate Bar’s 5 golden ticket. In Germany Dessel door Augustus Gloop found the first golden tiket followed by Veruca Salt finding the second. The first lucky winner! Augustus Gloop who lived in Dusseldorf Germany was […]

Letter to Mr wonka

May8

Dear Mr wonka, I am writing to inform you about my supreme choclate bar!This bar of choclate is like no other it has a caramel filling and has haribos inside.I strongly feel that you would love this choclate bar. Here are a few reasons why you should buy my choclate. *It has a varity of […]

My favourite part of charlie and the chocolate factory

May8

One day charlie bucket was on the way to school,then some thing caught his eyes,he paused and walked other to the object Charlie found a 50p a hole 50p. Charlie was cone thest he was had as meny.idea suddenly Charlie had an amazing idea.

letter to mr willy wonka

May8

Dear Mr wonka, I am writing to inform you about my terrific chocolate it will blow your mind away it is so good and so carefully selected flavours plus it has thing that no other chocolate bars have in it like: It has a ground braking design No other bar has six layers A melted […]

Writing a Story

May8

Charlie and his family were starved. When it was frozen and freezing and cold Charlies dad lost his job so they had less money and all they had to eat was icy cabbage and soup. Charlie went to school and when he went back from school he found a $50 note. He ran back home […]

Writing a Persuasive Advert

May8

This bar of chocolate is  the  newest  top  of  the  range  Wonka  bar. This delicious bar is smothered with golden candy flavoured like bubblegum! This bar of Chocolate is a bargain costing you only £1.50! With a tempting offer of buy one get two for free! In this delicious  chocolate bar  you will find  an […]

We are currently reading Charlie and the chocolate in literacy!

May8
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Opening a story one paragraph

May8

Charlie s family is poor and cold and very hungry and Charlie s life is hard,and they are desperate . All Charlie is thinking  is chocolate. Charlie is Hungry as well.

My idea for Charlie and the chocolate factory (part 2)

May8

One freezing cold day in the middle of winter.After a soggy pice of bread was melted in charlie’s mouth /he finally set off for school. After steping out of the rusty old door.He finally heard that 1 crunch of snow that he had been waiting for.Then with a click and a flash Charlie was off.But […]

Writing a persuasive letter

May8

Dear Mr Wonka, Im writing to you because i would like you to try my enjoyable new chocolate bar which has cotten candy and toffy and jelly beans in side it. When you try it all the chocolate will melt in your mouth and you will taste all the ingreedeents thats in side it. When […]

THE AMAZING STORY OF CHARLIE AND THE CHOCOLATE FACTORY!

May8

One morning which was really cold, Charlie began walking to school. Every since Charlie’s dad had lost his job his family had been struggling for money. Charlie’s stomach was beginning to rumble even more regularly like a volcano. He had to sacrifice his breakfast to give to his grandparents the breakfast they needed. A Charlie […]

2 DOWN , 3 TO GO !!!!!!!! by kiera

May8

On Monday the 15th of January 1950, two youngsters, Veruca Salt and Augustus Gloop, found each a Golden Ticket. Augustus stated “I know I was going to find one.” His Mother and Father were so proud of him that he celebrated by eating more candy and chocolate. Veruca Salt was also really happy. Her Dad […]

The second paragraph of Charlie

May8

One damp and and frosty morning Charlie was early for school he walked very slowly. He was thinking of the golden ticket he is so urgent to get it his heart was pounding. Only 1 left he wants to win it. On the way home Charlie paused and looked on the frosty floor he saw […]

Charlie and the chocolate factory

May8

Charlie was struggling. His family hadn’t eaten for days,freezing cold breeze surrounded them.Charlie was beginning to get skinnier then ever.The other day Charlie’s farther got fired,so he couldn’t even by a quarter of the food they could eat.One day Charlie was coming back from school when suddenly something shone in his eyes.He bent down and […]

An Opening of a Story

May8

Today Charlie struggled. His family starved for days and felt cold and sleeped. Charlie was conserving energy for the rest of the day. Suddenly Charlie found a shiny silver coin it was…. A fifty pence! He had never seen this amount of money! I hope you enjoyed 🙂

Our brilliant food faces!

May8
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