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The amazing story of charlie and the choclate factory

May8

Charlie was struggling. His family hadn't eaten substantial for days. Charlie's family was frozen and hungry.

They really want food because they're poor. Charlie went to get some food.

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“The amazing story of charlie and the choclate factory”

  1. May 13th, 2015 at 2:09 pm      Reply Joshua1417 Says:

    🙂 Good use of adverbs.
    –> Add a littel bit more.
    ? why did you wright about charley.


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