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The second paragraph of Charlie

May8

One damp and and frosty morning Charlie was early for school he walked very slowly. He was thinking of the golden ticket he is so urgent to get it his heart was pounding. Only 1 left he wants to win it. On the way home Charlie paused and looked on the frosty floor he saw something silver on the floor and Picked It up he thought what is it until he realised it was a fifty pence he ran home…

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“The second paragraph of Charlie”

  1. May 8th, 2015 at 1:33 pm      Reply Harriet17 Says:

    I liked your use of adjectives. Next time do some more of the writting.


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