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Writing a persuasive letter


Dear Mr Wonka,

Im writing to you because i would like you to try my enjoyable new chocolate bar which has cotten candy and toffy and jelly beans in side it. When you try it all the chocolate will melt in your mouth and you will taste all the ingreedeents thats in side it.

When you try it you will be serprized and it will be the best chocolate bar that you have ever tasted before. When i bring you the chocolate bar it would be the award winning chocolate bar and you need to make some in your factory!

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