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Dear diary

June26

Dear diary,                                                                                                 Yesterday I had a tour around the factory but suddenly I saw a tv and I ran to the TV and then jumped in .                                       Then I came out tiny out of the TV, now my life is difficult since I am tiny and  I can’t go to school.                                                       My dad is planning to make a little house  for me that I  can go inside and have fun.                                                                                   My dog keeps chasing me because I am tiny as a mouse when I don’t want to be chased.

I don’t know what’s my life is gonna be next of how hard it’s gonna be.

from mike teavee

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2 Comments to

“Dear diary”

  1. July 3rd, 2015 at 10:47 am      Reply Jaime17 Says:

    + really good work Jason

    > try and put some commas in there

    ? What part did you like the most in your work?


  2. September 21st, 2015 at 7:14 am      Reply Chloe17 Says:

    >do not forget your commas like Jaime was saying.
    ? what do you love about your work?
    + Very good Jason


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