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Writing a formal letter to Mr Wonka


Salt and pepper cottage
Salter Lane
Salt Shire
SA34 6DH
Mr Wonka’s Chocolate Factory
CH35 8FV

Dir Sir

I am writing  to  complain about  my poor Veruca  salt. Yesterday I was   ashamed  that  you  dragged  us  through  doors  so we  didn’t  get  a  tour  around  the  whole  factory


Then  we came to the nut room and my dear Veruca couldn’t take her eyes off the beautiful squirrels. My daughter wanted to take care of one your squirrels but you refused.


My Veruca went to get one of your ferocious squirrels grabbed my dear Veruca and pulled her to the floor.  They dragged  her to the  moldy  garbage  shoot. When  she  fell down  Veruca’s  beautiful  pink  dress  was  ruined. The vicious squirrels pushed my sugarplum down the nasty garbage however a mean squirrel pushed me down too.

My Veruca is stranded down in the stinky garbage as  the Oompa  Loompas  sang about my poor sugarplum. I demand compensation for the disgracefulness.


Yours faithfully,

Mrs Salt




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3 Comments to

“Writing a formal letter to Mr Wonka”

  1. July 3rd, 2015 at 10:30 am      Reply Jaime17 Says:

    + well done.

    > remember your full stops

    ? Did you have fun writing it?

  2. July 3rd, 2015 at 10:31 am      Reply Charlize17 Says:

    Wow Pheobe,that’s a outstanding formal letter.Keep it going.

  3. September 21st, 2015 at 7:09 am      Reply Chloe17 Says:

    Your letter is awesome Phoebe.

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